Go world story
The idea of my go world story just came to me because it had to be something meaningful, and what's more meaningful than my own inspiration, my mother. When I started writing about my mom it was easy to describe what she meant to me. I could've written a really list about my mom and it would probably describe a lot of moms out there in the world. Yet being able to find the right way to make the words flow in the correct sentence structure was pretty difficult for me, mainly when I have trouble writing because I write so plain. I had probably written about three different drafts, nothing I pretty much I did I was feeling it. It was all based on the same concept but it was all written differently all the times I wrote it, until I went to talk to the teacher and she was able to help me out with my last draft, which later turned out to be my final draft. Mrs. Rassmusen was able to help me out in my sentence structure and also being able to describe what my mother meant to me. I used even this "big" words that I've never seen in my life which increased my vocabulary. I was able to replace simple little words like "happy" to something more passionately exciting. When I was doing my video I was basically thinking of my writing. I wanted everyone to see what I meant with my text in pictures. I didn't want to be so plain and use the obvious pictures, but I wanted to use pictures that would speak a million words, bedsides the fact it had a caption under. When I was done with my project I thought I did an awesome job. To be honest I actually felt like I was a really good writer for the first time. All I did was take my time and ask for advice and I was able to write a master piece. When the teacher presented my video I was kinda nervous for what people thought of it, but I heard good stuff about it and I felt good. I felt like I was able to make an improvement in my vocabulary, writing and in my details.
